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the probability of miracles
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THE GAME
Nervousness comes with me when i hear the public scream. My team with anxious the game we will win! screams the coach with hope. With positive mind we start the game i take the ball and the match is mine but the other team also wants to fight. I only focus in my team and i and with passion we score our goal. We run and run and we celebrate feeling my heart popping out of my left side. We end the game and we fell proud of ourselves with this match that we win with inspiration. we are the best of all the teams and we will win every game. |
for 5 years the 17 year old cam, have been in and out of hospitals fighting against cancer, sadly cancer is winning the war on her body. the only opportunity that she have is an amazing miracle .but wow, cancer surprise her with a complication but she survived. she wants to spend the rest of her special and short time traveling 1,500 miles to the north to promise something. if science cant cure her, she have to search another and easily way, and teh other way that she found is "miracle town". her friends support her, they treat her like a queen, bcause they know she gonna die. but life surprises everyone in cam's life
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ARTIST STATEMENT.I choose soccer, because it is one of the most important thing in my life. I play it rally good, and i love my team. We always win Because we have hope and we have positive mind. That's why i also talked about my team. We are united, and we feel a connection when we play together. I also feel a lots of thing when im about to play. Im nervous, anxious, and scared. But when we start the game we feel that we have power and that we are the queens of the field.
the veldt critiquesci-fi elements on the story: the nursery is the main conflict in the story, this makes the kids stay away from the real life, their family, and theyr friends. the nursery is high advaced technology, so it cant recognize when it is an external problem. also the kids will become addicted to it and it is not a good way to make things ou want to become true. instead of they making something good to make true what they wanted.
the nursery could be a machine in the future, but people just see the good part and not the bad parts. maybe it could be a good thing in determined situations. this story reflects how kids can love more technology machines that their own family. |
critique.
I liked the movie because it was fun, detailed, I can understand good what was happening. It is really violent, with guns, rude guys, cars, more like an action movie. This version of the balcony scene was really entertained, and beautiful. One bad thing is that in the party they showed hat Romeo and mercuric where drugged, and that is not the example of s party in a love story.
The marriage was really romantic, it show that they where in love, the nurse helped them a lot and the scenery was really beautiful. One bad thing is that their actions where really exaggerated, like when the nurse and the other woman didn't find Juliet, they went paranoid, they started running screaming and a lot of exaggerated things until she appeared because she was taking a shower. |
the network
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gb7BMIgsi40.